Resubmitting a not so great assignment #1

I started writing the original ass. # 1 in the night before it was due, mistake number 1. I read over the chapter once and wrote no rough draft for the repot, second mistake. But to be completely honest I thought that would be adequate for this class because, no offense, its only strategies for success.... the nursing program wont look at this. If I was to self asses the first copy i would give me maybe a 6 out of 10. I think the best part of it was it was on time. I round about answered the questions.. At least. I realized when it was handed back that it wasn’t good enough. In the sense that maybe the course doesn’t count for nursing but if I want to be a better student I have to apply myself more even in the things that might not count, because I will get some good out of this class. Learning how to do better is the idea and by applying myself I will better myself. So the second time I re wrote the assignment I took the time to go through the chapter and actively read it, highlighting the important things. I made a rough draft, just in point form of how I would write the report and took the time to do a proper report format.

Introduction . . .

Hello,
My name is Jacquie Daniels. I am a pre health student at St Clair college in Chatham. When I am finished this program I am hoping to get accepted to the collabrative nursing program. I have a part time job at Futureshop, as a cashier. I have a wonderful family, Mom, Dad, and younger brother James. I have amazing friends, they've made me who I am, Lindsay and Megan. This year I travelled to Africa for a couple months on a mission trip and I really found my calling. When Im done school, I won't be living in Canada for long.
This blog is for a course in my program... I wouldnt normally chose to post my opinions and views on the internet, but maybe sometime i can make a difference with my thoughts.

The class in ending..
Till next time...